In the early days when Urdu poetry started making sense and the feeling that the “shayers” (poets) express through words are actually felt, it was natural to start rhyming some words and make out a few couplets here and there. While cleaning up an old carton today, out came of a piece of paper from the early days of UTP – The Poet.
Just so that this particular piece of poetry doesn’t get lost in time, I wanted to put it up in the blogosphere. Please bear with me. I don’t think I will ever write poetry again so criticize all you want.
Pehlay Kee Tarhan
Kya ab bhee mujhay ho chahti, pehlay kee tarhaan
Mujhay dekh kay ho sharmaati, pehlay kee tarhaanMein sab ko batata hoon apnay ishq kee daastaan
Tum ab bhee ho chupaati, pehlay kee tarhaanMein nay tumhein chaha, tum nay mujhay chaha
Phir ehsaan kyon ho jatati, pehlay kee tarhaanKya ab bhee raat ko batti nahi bujhaati
Kya ab bhee ho ghabraati, pehlay kee tarhaanMein nay tou chaaha rakh loon dil mein chuppa kay tum ko
Tum ab bhee nahin samaati, pehlay kee tarhaanTumhein bhoolnay kee koshish raaigaan hee challi gayee
Mujhay yaad ho ab bhee aati, pehlay kee tarhaanTumhein chorr chala jaaon ga, mazaqqan kaha tha mein nay
Par ho na tum jazbati, pehlay kee tarhaanTum hee ko mein hoon chahta, tum hee ho meray dilbur
Tum hee ho mujh ko bhaati, pehlay kee tarhaanMeri baaton pay na jaana, mein ho gaya deewana
Sach mein ho yaad aati, pehlay kee tarhaanTumhein bhool jaaon jaana tumhee nay tou kaha tha
Ab kyon ho yaad aati, pehlay kee tarhaanEk Umr~ beeth gayee hay tum hee ko chahtay chahtay
Meri nafs hee hay bataati, pehlay kee tarhaan
9 Responses to Once upon a Poet… :P
Sadia
October 10th, 2009 at 3:52 PM
I wouldn’t want to change anything nor criticize because I like the way you have captured your feelings into this poem.
I like it!
H
October 10th, 2009 at 6:42 PM
That’s actually pretty sweet!
Raza Ali
October 11th, 2009 at 4:40 PM
“Mein sab ko batata hoon apnay ishq kee daastaan
Tum ab bhee ho chupaati, pehlay kee tarhaan”
Wah mere wasi zafar, agar ye izhaar-e-fun jaari rahta tu tum “kash main tere haath ka kangan hota” pehlay likh dete. Jaate jaate aap ki behar ki nehar main aik ghota main bhi laga loon, arz kya hai:
Saba ik zamanay se sharm se chali hi nahi
Kya tum ab bhi nahi nahati, pehlay ki tarah
aadab arz hai.
ghazal pirzada
October 11th, 2009 at 6:22 PM
i stumbled upon this a few days back only.. had a print out of this with me…
Pehlay ki terhaan….
Lisa's Chaos
October 13th, 2009 at 6:33 PM
Why would you never write poetry again? You should!
Nussaibah
October 16th, 2009 at 4:28 PM
Awww, that’s so sweet.
Farhan
October 18th, 2009 at 3:05 PM
waah!
tu phir kyun ap shairi nahi kerte pehle ki tarha?
Amber Samad
October 28th, 2009 at 11:25 AM
I like it
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