Comments on: Once upon a Poet… :P http://www.umarpirzada.com/blog/2009/10/10/once-upon-a-poet-p/ Thu, 29 Jul 2010 18:29:37 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By:   Once upon a Poet … again… :P by UTP http://www.umarpirzada.com/blog/2009/10/10/once-upon-a-poet-p/#comment-9349   Once upon a Poet … again… :P by UTP Tue, 01 Dec 2009 11:21:58 +0000 http://www.umarpirzada.com/blog/?p=963#comment-9349 [...] from the previous post with the same topic, I found one more piece of my poetry which I really like myself also. [...] [...] from the previous post with the same topic, I found one more piece of my poetry which I really like myself also. [...]

]]> By: Amber Samad http://www.umarpirzada.com/blog/2009/10/10/once-upon-a-poet-p/#comment-8827 Amber Samad Wed, 28 Oct 2009 07:25:42 +0000 http://www.umarpirzada.com/blog/?p=963#comment-8827 I like it :) I like it :)

]]> By: Farhan http://www.umarpirzada.com/blog/2009/10/10/once-upon-a-poet-p/#comment-8566 Farhan Sun, 18 Oct 2009 11:05:42 +0000 http://www.umarpirzada.com/blog/?p=963#comment-8566 waah! tu phir kyun ap shairi nahi kerte pehle ki tarha? waah!
tu phir kyun ap shairi nahi kerte pehle ki tarha?

]]> By: Nussaibah http://www.umarpirzada.com/blog/2009/10/10/once-upon-a-poet-p/#comment-8513 Nussaibah Fri, 16 Oct 2009 12:28:05 +0000 http://www.umarpirzada.com/blog/?p=963#comment-8513 Awww, that's so sweet. :) Awww, that’s so sweet. :)

]]> By: Lisa's Chaos http://www.umarpirzada.com/blog/2009/10/10/once-upon-a-poet-p/#comment-8425 Lisa's Chaos Tue, 13 Oct 2009 14:33:37 +0000 http://www.umarpirzada.com/blog/?p=963#comment-8425 Why would you never write poetry again? You should! Why would you never write poetry again? You should!

]]> By: ghazal pirzada http://www.umarpirzada.com/blog/2009/10/10/once-upon-a-poet-p/#comment-8379 ghazal pirzada Sun, 11 Oct 2009 14:22:12 +0000 http://www.umarpirzada.com/blog/?p=963#comment-8379 i stumbled upon this a few days back only.. had a print out of this with me... Pehlay ki terhaan.... i stumbled upon this a few days back only.. had a print out of this with me…
Pehlay ki terhaan….

]]> By: Raza Ali http://www.umarpirzada.com/blog/2009/10/10/once-upon-a-poet-p/#comment-8376 Raza Ali Sun, 11 Oct 2009 12:40:27 +0000 http://www.umarpirzada.com/blog/?p=963#comment-8376 "Mein sab ko batata hoon apnay ishq kee daastaan Tum ab bhee ho chupaati, pehlay kee tarhaan" Wah mere wasi zafar, agar ye izhaar-e-fun jaari rahta tu tum "kash main tere haath ka kangan hota" pehlay likh dete. Jaate jaate aap ki behar ki nehar main aik ghota main bhi laga loon, arz kya hai: Saba ik zamanay se sharm se chali hi nahi Kya tum ab bhi nahi nahati, pehlay ki tarah aadab arz hai. “Mein sab ko batata hoon apnay ishq kee daastaan
Tum ab bhee ho chupaati, pehlay kee tarhaan”

Wah mere wasi zafar, agar ye izhaar-e-fun jaari rahta tu tum “kash main tere haath ka kangan hota” pehlay likh dete. Jaate jaate aap ki behar ki nehar main aik ghota main bhi laga loon, arz kya hai:

Saba ik zamanay se sharm se chali hi nahi
Kya tum ab bhi nahi nahati, pehlay ki tarah

aadab arz hai.

]]> By: H http://www.umarpirzada.com/blog/2009/10/10/once-upon-a-poet-p/#comment-8359 H Sat, 10 Oct 2009 14:42:53 +0000 http://www.umarpirzada.com/blog/?p=963#comment-8359 That's actually pretty sweet! :) That’s actually pretty sweet! :)

]]> By: Sadia http://www.umarpirzada.com/blog/2009/10/10/once-upon-a-poet-p/#comment-8357 Sadia Sat, 10 Oct 2009 11:52:57 +0000 http://www.umarpirzada.com/blog/?p=963#comment-8357 I wouldn't want to change anything nor criticize because I like the way you have captured your feelings into this poem. :) I like it! I wouldn’t want to change anything nor criticize because I like the way you have captured your feelings into this poem. :) I like it!

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